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Do any of your friends or family often complain about their job?

Most of my friends are often complain about their job. There are many issues in their job. Their boss, co-workers, overwork, and low money.

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Good morning Eun Chong! 
I think those are the common problems in some companies. 
I hope that they will use money to motivate people to work hard even harder - hahaha. 

Most of my friends are often complain about their job. 
>>> Most of my friends often complain about their jobs.
There are many issues in their job. 
>>> There are many issues in their jobs. 
Their boss, co-workers, overwork, and low money.
>>> Their boss, coworkers, overwork, and low money.

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