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\"When you cannot sleep\" was the best topic in our Junior free talking 5.

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At first, as you know, I thought the topic of "John's Restaurant" would be the most interesting, but it was very common than I thought, so I think a lot, and the most interesting thing was "When you can not sleep". I think the most memorable part was "insomnia". There are no diseases that are not dangerous, but I think I got quite shock by “insomnia” because in diseases that happen when I am not aware are considered the scariest. To be honest, how painful it must be for people with insomnia. They just slept, but when he wakes up, he's always in the living room, in front of someone's house, or sometimes they are on the roadside. I think this topic that made me think about this a lot, so that was the most interesting to me.

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Good evening to you Maria!

Having insomnia is absolutely terrible because even when you are exhausted, you still cannot sleep! So we are lucky to be able to sleep when we are weary at night. I actually wish you a good night sleep later. ^^

At last, we are done with the 5th book! Are you ready for the 6th?

See you then!

-T. Donna =)

At first, as you know, I thought the topic of "John's Restaurant" would be the most interesting, but it was very common than I thought, so I think a lot, and the most interesting thing was "When you can not sleep". 
>>At first, as you know, I thought the topic of "John's Restaurant" would be the most interesting, but it was very common than I thought, so I thought a lot, and the most interesting thing was "When you can not sleep". 

I think the most memorable part was "insomnia". 
>> Correct!

There are no diseases that are not dangerous, but I think I got quite shock by “insomnia” because in diseases that happen when I am not aware are considered the scariest. 
>> There are no disease that is not dangerous, but I think I got quite shocked by “insomnia” because in diseases that happen when I am not aware are considered the scariest. 

To be honest, how painful it must be for people with insomnia. 
>> Correct!

They just slept, but when he wakes up, he's always in the living room, in front of someone's house, or sometimes they are on the roadside. 
>> Correct!

I think this topic that made me think about this a lot, so that was the most interesting to me.
>> Correct!
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