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Do you prefer to eat at a restaurant or at home?

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I prefer to eat at home for two reasons. Firstly, delivery services have developed nowadays so we can enjoy lot's of delicious food at home. There are many times when I don't want to go out and the restaurant is uncomfortable. Sometimes it is gives me more healing to turn on a movie at home while eating food. Also if I eat food by ordering, more diverse foods can be eaten at once. For example, if I want to eat both Chinese and Korean food, I can order everything from each restaurant and eat at once. Secondly, foods in restaurants are often unsanitary. I can't see the process of cooking, so there is no way to know whether it is sanitary or not. To get more financial profit, they often use cheap ingredients and unsanitary dishes. If I cook at home by myself, I will be able to make much more hygienic and healthy food. For these reasons, I prefer eating at home.

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Good day, Olivia! I am glad that you answered the homework. I am looking forward to talk to you again tomorrow. See you and have a wonderful day! :)
- Teacher Sophia

I prefer to eat at home for two reasons. Firstly, delivery services have developed nowadays so we can enjoy lot's of delicious food at home.
>> 
I prefer to eat at home for two reasons. Firstly, delivery services have developed nowadays so we can enjoy lots of delicious food at home.
There are many times when I don't want to go out and the restaurant is uncomfortable. 
>> There are many times when I don't want to go out because the restaurant is uncomfortable. 
Sometimes it is gives me more healing to turn on a movie at home while eating food. 
>> Sometimes, it gives me a more healing to watch a movie at home while eating a food. 
Also if I eat food by ordering, more diverse foods can be eaten at once. 
>> Correct
For example, if I want to eat both Chinese and Korean food, I can order everything from each restaurant and eat at once. 
>> Correct
Secondly, foods in restaurants are often unsanitary. 
>> Correct
I can't see the process of cooking, so there is no way to know whether it is sanitary or not. 
>> Correct
To get more financial profit, they often use cheap ingredients and unsanitary dishes. 
>> Correct
If I cook at home by myself, I will be able to make much more hygienic and healthy food. For these reasons, I prefer eating at home.
>> Correct
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