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I have ever imagined what if there is only one language in the world. I think it would be much easier living than current world. However, it is important for people to learn any subjects and languages can be the interesting topics we have learnt. People feel uncomfortable meeting foreigners due to language barrier but some enjoy having a conversation with them although they can't speak other languages because of cultural differences. I usually feel excited when I try to do new activities. I guess that people want to make friends with someone who are different and have attracted to people who have similar interests and character. So It is really sad that some languages disappeared because it is also our culture in earth and we have responsibility to keep it and give it to our descendants.

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I have ever imagined what if there is only one language in the world.
>>> CORRECT
 I think it would be much easier living than current world. 
>>>  I think it would be much easier to live than now.
However, it is important for people to learn any subjects and languages can be the interesting topics we have learnt.
>>> However, it is important for people to learn some subjects and languages can be an interesting subject we could learn.
 People feel uncomfortable meeting foreigners due to language barrier but some enjoy having a conversation with them although they can't speak other languages because of cultural differences. 
>>> CORRECT
I usually feel excited when I try to do new activities.
>>> CORRECT
 I guess that people want to make friends with someone who are different and have attracted to people who have similar interests and character. 
>>>  I guess people want to make friends with someone who are different and are attracted to people who have similar interests and character. 
So it is really sad that some languages disappeared because it is also our culture in earth and we have responsibility to keep it and give it to our descendants.
>>> So it is really sad that some languages disappear because it is also our culture on earth and we are responsible to keep it and pass it on to our descendants.
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