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Q:Who would you like to be your employer soon?
A:I want someone who knows manythings about animals to be my employer.
First, I want to be a biologist, so if my employer know manythings about animals, I can know more informations about animals.
Second, if my employer know manythings about animals, then he could agree with doing expiriment about animals.
Lastly, if my employer know manythings about animals, he can tell me that I have wrong information, and teach me more informations.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)




Q: Who would you like to be your employer soon?

A: I want someone who knows manythings about animals to be my employer.
>>> I want someone who knows many things about animals to be my employer.
OR: I want an employer that knows a lot of things about animals. 

First, I want to be a biologist, so if my employer know manythings about animals, I can know more informations about animals.
>>> First, I want to be a biologist, so if my employer knows many things about animals, I can know more information about animals.
OR: First, I want to be a biologist, so if my employer knows many things about animals, I can gain more knowledge about animals.

Second, if my employer know manythings about animals, then he could agree with doing expiriment about animals.
>>> Second, if my employer knows many things about animals, then he will agree to do experiments on animals.

Lastly, if my employer know manythings about animals, he can tell me that I have wrong information, and teach me more informations.
>>> Lastly, if my employer knows many things about animals, then he can tell me if I have wrong information, and teach me how to correct this information.
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