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Q. Would you be willing to undergo surgery with an AI as the surgeon? Explain.
A. Of course, because a man sometimes make a mistakes but AI doesn't make a mistakes in any circumstance without blackout.
Usually, a robot doesn't feel tired and they can concentrate 100percent always.
So, If AI will developed enough to surgery, I take surgery with Ai.

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Q. Would you be willing to undergo surgery with an AI as the surgeon? Explain.

A. Of course, because a man sometimes make a mistakes but AI doesn't make a mistakes in any circumstance without blackout.
>>> Of course, because a man sometimes makes mistakes but AI doesn't make any mistake as long as there is no blackout.

Usually, a robot doesn't feel tired and they can concentrate 100percent always.
>>> Usually, a robot doesn't feel tired and they can concentrate 100 percent far better than humans.

So, If AI will developed enough to surgery, I take surgery with Ai.
>>> So, If AI will be developed enough for surgery, then I am willing to take a surgery with AI.

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