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I'm curious about telemedicine that is going to develop.
it can increase patient comfort levels to enable easy communication with doctors.
Alan Turing can be seen as a pioneer of A.I.

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Hi Min A,
These are grammatically correct sentences. Most of her sentences are simple and grammatically correct. You need to be careful about how you construct sentences. You need to study the subject-verb agreement as well as the correct tenses of the verb. 

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Are these grammatically correct?
>>Are these grammatically correct?(Correct)
I'm curious about telemedicine that is going to develop.
>>I'm curious about telemedicine that is going to develop.(Correct)
it can increase patient comfort levels to enable easy communication with doctors.
>>It can increase patient comfort levels to enable easy communication with doctors.(Correct)
Alan Turing can be seen as a pioneer of A.I.
>> Alan Turing can be seen as a pioneer of A.I.(Correct)
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Are these grammatically correct?

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