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Q:Would you like to be in a class with students of different nationalities?
A:Yes, I wnt to be in a class with students of different netionalities.
First, if my classmates all have different nationalities, then I can know their country's cultures.
Second, if my classmates all have differnrt nationalities, then I can know more things about their countries.
Lastly, I can know my classmate's opinion about my country if they have all different nationalities.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. 
  Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Q: Would you like to be in a class with students of different nationalities?

A: Yes, I wnt to be in a class with students of different netionalities.
>>> Yes, I want to be in a class with students of different nationalities.

First, if my classmates all have different nationalities, then I can know their country's cultures.
>>> First, if all of my classmates have different nationalities, then I can know their country's different cultures.

Second, if my classmates all have differnrt nationalities, then I can know more things about their countries.
>>> Second, if all of my classmates have different nationalities, then I can know more information about their countries.

Lastly, I can know my classmate's opinion about my country if they have all different nationalities.
>>> Lastly, I can know my classmate's opinions about my country if they all have different nationalities.
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