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Do you mind sharing your problems with your friends?

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1. Do you mind sharing your problems with your friends?
It`s not easy to share all over my problems with my friends. but we are thinking and worrying about that. we are going to try to solve
my problems together.
2. What questions don`t you mind people asking you?
I don`t mind people ask me my private questions. for example, the detailed my own home life or bygones and so on.

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Hello Sir Hyuji. Thank you for this.

1. Do you mind sharing your problems with your friends?
It`s not easy to share all over my problems with my friends. 
>>>  It`s not easy to share all of my problems with my friends.  
but we are thinking and worrying about that. 
>>>  OR: Although we think and worry about that.
we are going to try to solve my problems together.
>>> correct.   
2. What questions don`t you mind people asking you?
I don`t mind people ask me my private questions. 
>>>  I don`t mind people asking me private questions.   
for example, the detailed my own home life or bygones and so on.
>>> For example, details of my own home life or bygones and so on.   
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