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Why did you agree to practice your English regularly?

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English is not my mother tongue.
So we studied English for a long time at school but it is difficult for us to communicate in English.
In particular, between my native langusge and Englisg are very differdnt in grammer, stucture and pronociation.
Above all, it is difficult for us to have the chance speak Englisg in our daily life.
I try to practice English regularly spending cost and time.

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Hi Lily,
Thank you so much for your ideas!
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY.
Why did you agree to practice your English regularly?
English is not my mother tongue.
CORRECT!
or>>English is not my first language.
So we studied English for a long time at the school but it is difficult for us to communicate in English.
CORRECT!
or>>So although, we studied English for a long time in school, we still find it hard to communicate in English.
In particular, between my native langusge and Englisg are very differdnt in grammer, stucture and pronociation.
>>In particular, my native language and the English language have very different grammar structure and pronunciation.
Above all, it is difficult for us to have the chance speak Englisg in our daily life.
>>Most of all, it is difficult for us to have the chance of speaking English in our daily lives.
I try to practice English regularly spending cost and time.
>>I try to practice English regularly by spending so much money and time.
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