¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Which natural disaster do you fear most and why?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÃÖ*¿ø
2021-06-04 357

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I¡¯m fear floods. because fire is leave ash, but water is nothings leave and water have not how to fill with water. fire is there¡¯s a way to put out a fire. for example, we can spray water or soil using helicopters.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Won!

People fear natural disasters because they are disastrous. People's lives and safety are put in danger. Habitats, homes and property are destroyed. Most people would prefer the life (and everything that goes with it) that they live now to life (or lack thereof) that would follow a natural disaster.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I¡¯m fear floods. 
>> CORRECT

because fire is leave ash, but water is nothings leave and water have not how to fill with water. 
>> It's because leaves ash but water leaves nothing. There's no way to stop water from filling up.

fire is there¡¯s a way to put out a fire. 
>> And there's a ways to put out a fire. 

for example, we can spray water or soil using helicopters.
>> For example, we can spray or soil using helicopters on a burning forrest.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
108637 What was your first impression about your boyfriend? ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 1
108636 Homework (285) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 536
108635 Do you think the past was better than the present? Why or why... Ȳ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 971
108634 The source of my energy ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 421
108633 homework ±è*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 1
108632 Composition º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 2
108631 Homework °­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 414
108630 How are you the same and different with your brother? ±è*¶û ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 969
108629 Do you usually watch movies at the theater or watch them at... ±è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 439
108628 How is beauty defined in your culture? ÃÖ*¿Á ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 2
108627 Answar ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 978
108626 Horror movies ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 2
108625 How would you describe yourself to someone who hasn¡¯t met you? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 0
108624 What are the things that people don\'t usually know about you? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 448
108623 Tuesday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 1167
108622 Homework Ç¥*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 3
108621 Homework º¯*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 836
108620 Homework 5 / 14 / FRI ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 447
108619 Homework ÀÓ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 4
108618 Homework Àü*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2021-05-18 760

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04