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I think Zeus is the powerful person in our world.

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Realistically, the most powerful person is the president. But if you look at it a bit unrealistically, I think the most powerful person is God of Zeus. I think that Zeus might be the most powerful god in mythology. For reference, I like Greek mythology, so I know a little about Zeus. First, Zeus is the god of lightning and thunder and the wife is Hera, the goddess of jealousy.
However, Zeus is interested in women, so when he saw a beautiful woman, he is a playboy who disguises himself and approaches him. But he is also the father of all gods...
P.S. In the comic, god fell in love with a fairy the name of ÀÌ¿À(I can't say what is the English name of ÀÌ¿À)..and once disguised herself as a cow.
The largest guy is Zeus, and the right part of the women is Hera

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Hi Maria! Happy new week!

Indeed, Zeus is an extremely mighty god in Greek Mythology. When there is a problem, he suddenly appears or he sends another god to the rescue. I agree that he is the most powerful in all gods in all mythologies.

Thanks for a very good composition here below. See you in class in a few minutes. 

-T. Donna =)

Realistically, the most powerful person is the president. 
>> Correct!

But if you look at it a bit unrealistically, I think the most powerful person is God of Zeus. 
>> But if you look at it a bit unrealistically, I think the most powerful person is the God Zeus. 

I think that Zeus might be the most powerful god in mythology. 
>> Correct!

For reference, I like Greek mythology, so I know a little about Zeus. 
>> Correct!

First, Zeus is the god of lightning and thunder and the wife is Hera, the goddess of jealousy.
>> Correct!

However, Zeus is interested in women, so when he saw a beautiful woman, he is a playboy who disguises himself and approaches him. 
>> Correct!

But he is also the father of all gods...
>> Correct!

P.S. In the comic, god fell in love with a fairy the name of ÀÌ¿À(I can't say what is the English name of ÀÌ¿À)..and once disguised herself as a cow.
>> Correct!

The largest guy is Zeus, and the right part of the women is Hera
>> Correct!
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