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When was the last time you bought something expensive?

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I bought a MacBook two months ago. The laptop that I used is very old.. And It is getting slow.. So I decided to buy new laptop.
And I'm actually Apple Lover.I'm using a lot of things of Apple. So It was easy to decide what to buy.
You know that? New MacBook is famous because it's cheaper than it's performance.
As the result, I'm going to pay this by next year. haha

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Hi Eun Chong! 
I think MacBook cost a lot of money - hahaha. 
Yes, it is still expensive :) 

I bought a MacBook two months ago. 
>>> CORRECT! 
The laptop that I used is very old.
>>> CORRECT! 
And It is getting slow.
>>> And it's getting slow. 
So I decided to buy new laptop.
>>> CORRECT! 
And I'm actually Apple Lover.
>>> And I'm actually an Apple brand lover.
I'm using a lot of things of Apple. 
>>> I'm using a lot of things from Apple.
So It was easy to decide what to buy.
>>> So it was easy to decide what to buy.
You know that? 
>>> You know what? 
New MacBook is famous because it's cheaper than it's performance.
>>> You know what? The New MacBook is famous its price and it's performance. 
As the result, I'm going to pay this by next year. haha
>>> As a result, I will pay for this by next year. Haha! 

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