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What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?

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What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?

I think that our government of South Korea focus on vaccine supply.
Our country still has a lot of confirmed cases of COVID-19.
Many people want to get a vaccine and a travel aboard recovery is starting.
I also hope to travel without worry.
The governemnt is extpecting that most people are getting a vaccine later this year.
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Hi Monica!

Governments in emerging economies have, over the decades, tried many different policy agendas to stimulate development, accelerate growth, alleviate poverty, and achieve any number of other goals to mixed success. Nowadays, the urgent problem is regarding the pandemic. They work really hard on how to improve their country and their people as well. Your ideas are great. Thanks for sharing. :) 

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I think that our government of South Korea focus on vaccine supply.
>> I think that the government of South Korea should focus on the vaccine supply.

Our country still has a lot of confirmed cases of COVID-19.
>> CORRECT

Many people want to get a vaccine and a travel aboard recovery is starting.
>> Many people want to get the vaccine and travel abroad. 

I also hope to travel without worry.
>> CORRECT

The governemnt is extpecting that most people are getting a vaccine later this year.
>> The government is expecting that most people will get the vaccine later this year. 
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