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What advice will you say to a newly hired worker who is badmouthing his /her former employer?

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There must be a reason to badmouth someone, whoever it is. I will first find out whether it is an objective fact to gossip about or a fairly subjective fact. In my experience, most people who gossip are weak in themselves, so they choose to put others down as a means of defense. I would try to understand the intentions of this newly hired worker rather than what he/she is saying, and to advise that badmouthing is only good for doing harm.

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There must be a reason to badmouth someone, whoever it is.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> There must be a basis for badmouthing someone or whoever it is.
I will first find out whether it is an objective fact to gossip about or a fairly subjective fact. 
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> I have to assess whether the gossip is an objective or subjective fact.
In my experience, most people who gossip are weak in themselves, so they choose to put others down as a means of defense.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> From my experience, people who gossip are weak themselves, so they just ut other's down as a form of defense.
I would try to understand the intentions of this newly hired worker rather than what he/she is saying, and to advise that badmouthing is only good for doing harm.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> I will try to understand the purpose of this newly hired worker rather than the gossip and to advise him/her that badmouthing has consequences.

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