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Driving Laws and Alcohol

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Our county keeps the driving law too strict. The drivers are arrested immediately happening an accident in the school zones
in front of the elementary school gates.

The alcohol has changed my behaviors in walking styles when I have drinking very much.

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Hi Mr. Jin!
These are good sentence patterns.
They are very clear and direct to the point.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Our county keeps the driving law too strict. 
>> We have strict driving laws in our country.
The drivers are arrested immediately happening an accident in the school zones in front of the elementary school gates.
>> Drivers are immediately arrested when an accident happens in school zones in front of the gates of elementary school. 
The alcohol has changed my behaviors in walking styles when I have drinking very much.
>> Alcohol changes the way I walk whenever I have too much to drink.
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