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What are the things that people used to do before but not anymore?

작성자: 류*주
2021-06-08 314

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During prehistoric times, there was a lot of detached stonewares that were used for hunting animals.
But the farming became common so the detached stonewares were droppen into oblivion by people.
There was a lot of wars so people needed mighty weapons.
So they made a lot of swords, but the swords were droppen into oblivion too because of the more mighty weapons.
People made carriage for their transportation but we don't use it anymore because of more faster and safety transportations.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi John!

Regarding the situation that we have today, which is the pandemic, I think there are a lot of things we used to do before that we can't right now. COVID-19 has affected our lifestyles crucially. Everyday things we miss, took for granted and can't wait to have back. Whether it's going for a cup of coffee, taking a stroll and sparking up conversations with a friendly dog owner or enjoying a meal with friends, even mundane moments of once daily routines feel like a luxury people are already eager to have back.

PS: Your answer is really interesting because it involves a lot of facts about history. Keep it up! ^^

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

During prehistoric times, there was a lot of detached stonewares that were used for hunting animals.
>> During the pre-historic times, there were a lot of detached stone wares that were used for hunting animals. 

But the farming became common so the detached stonewares were droppen into oblivion by people.
>> But farming became common so the detached stone wares were dropped into the oblivion by the people. 

There was a lot of wars so people needed mighty weapons.
>> There were a lot of wars back then so many people needed weapons. 

So they made a lot of swords, but the swords were droppen into oblivion too because of the more mighty weapons.
>> They made swords before but was put to waste because there were more mighty swords. 

People made carriage for their transportation but we don't use it anymore because of more faster and safety transportations.
>> People made carriage for their transportation but we don't use it anymore because of more faster and safer transportations.

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