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What are the things that people used to do before but not anymore?

When I was young, there's a lot of video rental shops. I have a memory to borrow a cartoon video and watch it. However, we can find so many kinds of videos easily on Youtube, and live streaming has become very common such as Netflix, Disney+, etc. So, it's seldomly find a video rental shop nowadays.

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Hi Homer!

Regarding the situation that we have today, which is the pandemic, I think there are a lot of things we used to do before that we can't right now. COVID-19 has affected our lifestyles crucially. Everyday things we miss, took for granted and can't wait to have back. Whether it's going for a cup of coffee, taking a stroll and sparking up conversations with a friendly dog owner or enjoying a meal with friends, even mundane moments of once daily routines feel like a luxury people are already eager to have back.

It's nice to see you reminisce the good old days. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

When I was young, there's a lot of video rental shops. 
>> When I was young, there were a lot of video rental shops. 

I have a memory to borrow a cartoon video and watch it. 
>> I have a memory that I used to borrow cartoon videos and watch it. 

However, we can find so many kinds of videos easily on Youtube, and live streaming has become very common such as Netflix, Disney+, etc. 
>> However, we can find so many kinds of videos easily on YouTube. Also, live streaming has become very common such as Netflix, Disney+, etc. 

So, it's seldomly find a video rental shop nowadays.
>> So I seldom find a video rental shop nowadays.

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