무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

my new custmer

작성자: 박*명
2021-06-09 418

회원님의 영작문

My friend is a IT company a vice-president. He requested me help him.
The reason was a technical problem. His company has been doing special project .
but It got a ploblem at technical. The ploblem has not solved for 4 months.
so His customer was a upset. My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me.
I met his customer yesterday.
and I met some project member before metting customer.
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
Anyway I had to convince customer. I succeed and my customer was safisfied.
but I had a big problem and homework.
The problem was a lot and various kinds.
My customer has not enough time.
He want to finish this problem until this month.
but I had another schedule.
I am very busy with my schedual right now.
I will be more busy with schedual added.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Sir John.

My friend is a IT company a vice-president. 
>>>  My friend is an IT company vice-president.  
He requested me help him.
>>>  He requested for my help.  
The reason was a technical problem. 
>>> correct   
His company has been doing special project .
>>>  His company has been doing a special project.  
but It got a ploblem at technical. 
>>> But it has some stechnical problem.    
The ploblem has not solved for 4 months. so His customer was a upset. 
>>>  The problem has not been solved for 4 months so his customer was upset.    
My friend told me you can solve that. and the ploblem is not difficult for me.
>>>  My friend asked me to solve it and the problem is not difficult for me.  
I met his customer yesterday.
>>>  correct  
and I met some project member before metting customer.
>>> And I met some project members before meeting the customer.    
I asked some situation about project. and I found bad problem.
>>> I asked the condition of the project and I found the problem.  
I thought maybe project manager did not report all problem .
>>> I though maybe the project manager did not report all the problem.  
Anyway I had to convince customer. 
>>> Anyway, I had to convince the customer.     
I succeed and my customer was safisfied.
>>> I succeeded and my customer was satisfied.   
but I had a big problem and homework.
>>> But I had a big problem and homework to do.   
The problem was a lot and various kinds.
>>> There were various problems.    
My customer has not enough time.
>>>  My customer does not have enough time.  
He want to finish this problem until this month. but I had another schedule.
>>> He wants to finish this problem by the end of this month but I have a lot of other schedules.
I am very busy with my schedual right now.
>>> I am very busy with my schedule right now.   
I will be more busy with schedual added.
>>>  I will be more busy with schedule added. 
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
109937 Thursday Homework 박*연 완료 2021-07-10 484
109936 What do you do when you catch someone with incorrect grammar? 안*윤 완료 2021-07-09 2
109935 Dear. Teacher Maine 이*현 완료 2021-07-09 498
109934 Why do many people from different parts of the world want to... 이*현 완료 2021-07-09 335
109933 What is the best reason why people get a pet in your country... 박*경 완료 2021-07-09 427
109932 homework 전*원 완료 2021-07-09 554
109931 I agree with Mike\'s Opinion 김*랑 완료 2021-07-09 643
109930 Homework 함*주 완료 2021-07-09 1
109929 Absent 송*철 완료 2021-07-09 522
109928 If you are to start a business, what would that be and why? 여*진 완료 2021-07-09 0
109927 Homework {07/09} 차*빈 완료 2021-07-09 433
109926 Do you think that talent is needed to be successful in life? Why... 류*주 완료 2021-07-09 527
109925 Friday homework 류*우 완료 2021-07-09 479
109924 Stories 유*진 완료 2021-07-09 494
109923 What do you like do doing your free time 이*지 완료 2021-07-09 461
109922 \"Serious sport has nothing to do with fair play. It is bound up... 김*연 완료 2021-07-09 489
109921 Homework. 김*혁 완료 2021-07-09 401
109920 What do you like about your neighborhood? 김*연 완료 2021-07-09 0
109919 Homework😀 박*리 완료 2021-07-09 373
109918 Is being poor a valid reason to commit crime? Why or why not? 최*원 완료 2021-07-09 495

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]