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Q:As a tenant that lives in an apartment how can you make sure that you don't disturb your neighbors?
Tell me the things you do not to disturb them?
A:I must not run or jump in apartment, and I must not listen or play a music in loud sound.
Firstly, if I run or jump in apartment, the sound that sounds when I land can disturb my neighbors.
Secondly, if I listen or play a music in loud sound, then the sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do these.
Lastly, I must not hit something very strong too, because its' sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do this.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Q: As a tenant that lives in an apartment how can you make sure that you don't disturb your neighbors?
    Tell me the things you do not to disturb them?

A: I must not run or jump in apartment, and I must not listen or play a music in loud sound.
>>> I must not run or jump in the apartment, and I must not listen or play music loudly.

Firstly, if I run or jump in apartment, the sound that sounds when I land can disturb my neighbors.
>>> Firstly, if I run or jump in the apartment, the sound when I land can disturb my neighbors especially the people living on the lower floors.

Secondly, if I listen or play a music in loud sound, then the sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do these.
>>> Secondly, if I listen to or play loud music, then the sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do these things.

Lastly, I must not hit something very strong too, because its' sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do this.
>>> Lastly, I must not hit something very strongly, because the sound can disturb my neighbors so I must not do this.
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