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If I go into a black hole, I would rather go to the future than to the past. Maybe some people want to go back to the past because they want to change the big mistakes or regrets they made in the past, while those who want to go to the future to see if they really achieved their dreams in the future or see a changes in society quickly. It may be that they want to go to the future with anticipation because they are curious about the future. Even if I go to the past because of I want to correct the mistakes or regrets I made in the past, but I do not have the confidence to completely fix it, so I would rather go to the future and end my life with a perfect life. I have to go to the

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Hello Maria!

This is a very good decision to see the future. When we try to see something in the past, we might get tempted to fix that thing and it can affect the future. After all, past is past, we can only make today great to look forward to a better future of no regrets and full of hope.

Thanks again for sending me this piece of very good writing. I admire your effort and thoughts you put into your work.

Stay being excellent!

See you.

-T. Donna =)

If I go into a black hole, I would rather go to the future than to the past. 
>> Correct!

Maybe some people want to go back to the past because they want to change the big mistakes or regrets they made in the past, while those who want to go to the future to see if they really achieved their dreams in the future or see a changes in society quickly. 
>> ...or see a change in society quickly.

It may be that they want to go to the future with anticipation because they are curious about the future. 
>> Correct!

Even if I go to the past because of I want to correct the mistakes or regrets I made in the past, but I do not have the confidence to completely fix it, so I would rather go to the future and end my life with a perfect life. I have to go to the
>> Correct!
Or: I have to go to the future.
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