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One of the hardest decisions is to bid farewell to your company? How was it when you left your previ

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Each person would have a different reason to resign. I also had my own reasons when I moved to work. When I left my previous job, there was an inevitable reason to leave that my husband got an offer to work abroad, but there was also a reason to start my own business after leaving the company. It was a new challenge in my life, and when I left the company, co-workers said it was a courageous decision and wished me success in the future. I really had mixed feeling at that time. It's not as easy as we think to get out of a stable environment. But trying to get out of the loop is a catalyst for me to grow further.

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Happy Friday Gianna! Thank you for this, I love reading your insights on different situations. why don't you write a book? It would be perfect especially for those who are seeking some advice or knowledge.
~Aki :)
Each person would have a different reason to resign. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Everyone has various reasons of quitting their jobs.
I also had my own reasons when I moved to work. 
>>> I also had my own reasons when I moved out from work 
When I left my previous job, there was an inevitable reason to leave that my husband got an offer to work abroad, but there was also a reason to start my own business after leaving the company.
>>> When I left my previous job, there was an inevitable reason to leave because my husband got an offer to work abroad, and  a reason for me to start my own business after leaving the company.
 It was a new challenge in my life, and when I left the company, co-workers said it was a courageous decision and wished me success in the future. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> That was a new chapter of my life when I left the company. My co-workers commended that it was a courageous decision and wished my success in the future.
I really had mixed feeling at that time. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I had a mixed emotion at that time.
It's not as easy as we think to get out of a stable environment. But trying to get out of the loop is a catalyst for me to grow further.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>It was very challenging to come up with that decision of leaving from a stable environment but  getting out from a loop was a motivation for me to develop more.
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