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Dear Don,

Let's talk about vaccine for poor countries.
Now all contries need a vaccine for Covid19.
But USA got most of all for themselves.
Poor country could not buy the vaccine because of no money. So The rich country overcome this situation quickly but a lot of people who live in poor country are going to die due to this pandamic.

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Hi Andrew!

Thank you for our class today. See you again tomorrow.

Dear Don,

Let's talk about vaccine for poor countries.
>> Let's talk about vaccines for poor countries.

Now all contries need a vaccine for Covid19.
>> Now all countries needs vaccines for Covid19.

But USA got most of all for themselves.
>> But USA got most of the vaccines for their country.

Poor country could not buy the vaccine because of no money. So The rich country overcome this situation quickly but a lot of people who live in poor country are going to die due to this pandamic.
>> Poor countries could not buy the vaccines because they have no money. So rich countries overcome this situation quickly but a lot of people who live in poor countries are going to die due to this pandemic.
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