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What skill are you eager to learn and why?

I want to have the skill to find an insight for improvement The main duty of my role, is to establish and conducting action plans to managing our performance by arranging data. However, there are more than100+ metrics and performance indicators, and all of them are related complexibily. So sometimes, it's very difficult to arrange and understand them. I want to have the ability to managing them to the best in the future.

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I want to have the skill to find an insight for improvement The main duty of my role, is to establish and conducting action plans to managing our performance by arranging data. 
>> I want to have the skill to know the insight for improvement. The main duty of my role is to establish and conducting action plans to managing our performance by arranging data. 

However, there are more than100+ metrics and performance indicators, and all of them are related complexibily. 
>> However, there are more than100+ metrics and performance indicators and all of them are very complex. 

So sometimes, it's very difficult to arrange and understand them. 
>> CORRECT

I want to have the ability to managing them to the best in the future.
>> I want to have the ability to manage them with my best in the future. 
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