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Q. Do people drive well in your country?
A.Most of people drives well but there are some selfish people, too.
Especially if someone cut in my driving line in a sudden on rush-hour, it drives me embarrassed.
I've got two accidents in past months, Both occurred in the morning on my way to office with my boys.
After that accidents, I always drives carefully and sensitively.

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Hi Flora, thank you for this one. Have a great day!
Jasmin 


Most of people drives well but there are some selfish people, too.
>>Most of the people drive carefully  but there are reckless drivers as well 
Especially if someone cut in my driving line in a sudden on rush-hour, it drives me embarrassed.
>>Especially when someone drives fast and cut in line during rush hours. It makes me frustrated. 
I've got two accidents in past months, Both occurred in the morning on my way to office with my boys.
>>I've been in two car accidents in the past months both happened in the morning while me and my boys were on our way to my office. 
After that accidents, I always drives carefully and sensitively.
>>After the accidents, I always make sure that I'm driving carefully and attentively. 
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