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Do you think change is good? Why or why not?

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I think the only change is good, but I think too much fast change is not a good thing.
Change is obvious thing that all of creatures have.
We have to change becuase the world s changing, and also we have to change because our environment is changing.
But we, humans are changing so fast because of developement of science.

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I think the only change is good, but I think too much fast change is not a good thing.
>> I think that change is good but too much change isn't.

Change is obvious thing that all of creatures have.
>> Change is an obvious thing that happens to everyone. 

We have to change becuase the world s changing, and also we have to change because our environment is changing.
>> We have to change because the world is changing as well. And also. we have to adapt to the changing environment. 

But we, humans are changing so fast because of developement of science.
>> But humans are changing a lot of things as well because of the development of Science. 
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