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Why is English fluency significant for you?

작성자: 김*수
2021-06-14 602

회원님의 영작문

I want to be an English teacher, so I have to have professional English skills to achieve it. If I can’t speak English fluently, I cannot also teach students well. When I was in a middle and high school, students evaluated teacher’s qualification. After that, if they judged a teacher is not good at English, they didn’t concentrate on a class. As this experience, English fluency is so crucial for me. I don’t want to be ignored by students.
In addition, I hope I have a confidence when I speak English. I’m not confidence and I’m very nervous when I speak or present in front of many people. I’m sometimes wondering if I were good at English, I will not be afraid of speaking English. English fluency is important to have a confidence for me.
In short, English fluency is a way to be recognized and to be more confident. As these reasons, English fluency is crucial for me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Ria!

I want to be an English teacher, so I have to have professional English skills to achieve it. 
>>> correct
If I can’t speak English fluently, I cannot also teach students well. 
>>> correct  
When I was in a middle and high school, students evaluated teacher’s qualification. 
>>> OR: When I was in middle school and high school, students evaluated teacher’s qualification.   
After that, if they judged a teacher is not good at English, they didn’t concentrate on a class. 
>>> OR: At that time, if they figured the teacher is not good in English, they lose interest in class. 
As this experience, English fluency is so crucial for me. 
>>>  OR: Due to this experience, English fluency is so crucial for me.  
I don’t want to be ignored by students.
>>> correct  
In addition, I hope I have a confidence when I speak English. 
>>> In addition, I hope I have the confidence when I speak in English.  
I’m not confidence and I’m very nervous when I speak or present in front of many people. 
>>> I’m not confident and I’m very nervous when I speak or present in front of many people.    
I’m sometimes wondering if I were good at English, I will not be afraid of speaking English. 
>>> OR: I sometimes wonder if I were good in English, I would not be afraid of speaking it.  
English fluency is important to have a confidence for me.
>>> English fluency is important to have confidence for me.  
In short, English fluency is a way to be recognized and to be more confident. 
>>> correct  
As these reasons, English fluency is crucial for me.
>>For these reasons, English fluency is crucial for me.   

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