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The book is "Love : A fruit always in season" written by Mother Teresa.
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Hi Eun Ha!
I'm very interested in your answer.
This requires more discussion so let's talk more in class.
Thank you for making the effort today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The book is "Love : A fruit always in season" written by Mother Teresa.
>> The book is entitled "Love : A fruit always in season" written by Mother Teresa.
The is a kind of daily meditations book.
>> Correct
The daily meditations book is always on my desk.
>> This daily meditations book is always on my desk.
Mother Teresa who wrote the book teach me how to love and what to do through her all life.
>> Mother Teresa who wrote the book taught me how to love and what to do throughout my life. 
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