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Tigers are endangered in our country!

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2021-06-15 376

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There are many endangered species in Korea, but among them, tigers are in the most urgent situation. Apparently, tigers are brave and their leather patterns are very unique and pretty, so many hunters catch or kill them. But even if it's scary, if you nurture and treat him well, they sees you as there owner, and they don't hurt you. If I ever go where there are tigers, I want to rescue them. Ah! And I watched a video, and a grandfather had been watching a lion cub since he was little, and he was very close with that friend. But now that the lion has grown, we can't be together anymore, so we sent him to Africa. One day, my grandfather called there and said I wanted to see it that lion. And then the lion sniffed it for a while and then rubbed it against his body and hugged him. It was very interesting!

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Hi Maria!

This is a very touching story of a fierce animal that turned into pet. Well, if animals are fed and taken cared of in captivity, they can live long an adapt to the environment of people. However, if they grew up in the wilderness, they will also be wild. Here on your story, the tiger even remembered the scent of his old friend.

Let's talk about more of this story in  class tomorrow. Thank you very much for sharing and answering the homework today!

-T. Donna =)

There are many endangered species in Korea, but among them, tigers are in the most urgent situation. 
>> Correct!

Apparently, tigers are brave and their leather patterns are very unique and pretty, so many hunters catch or kill them. 
>> Correct!

But even if it's scary, if you nurture and treat him well, they sees you as there owner, and they don't hurt you. 
>> But even if it's scary, if you nurture and treat them well, they see you as their owner and they don't hurt you. 

If I ever go where there are tigers, I want to rescue them. 
>> Correct!

Ah! And I watched a video, and a grandfather had been watching a lion cub since he was little, and he was very close with that friend. 
>> Correct!

But now that the lion has grown, we can't be together anymore, so we sent him to Africa. 
>> But now that the lion has grown, we can't be together anymore, so he sent him to Africa. 

One day, my grandfather called there and said I wanted to see it that lion. 
>>  One day, my grandfather called them and said that he wanted to see that lion. 

And then the lion sniffed it for a while and then rubbed it against his body and hugged him. It was very interesting!
>> Correct!
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