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Is voting an important responsibility of a citizen? Why or why not?

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I think it's important. but I don't know politics well. because I am busy and not interested about it. so I always vote politician who my moms like. she knows politics very a lot and know me and my sister why I vote them.

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Hi Tobby! ^^

Voting is necessary. You have the power to decide on the quality of life you want for yourself and future generations. Voting is your chance to stand up for the issues you care about like public transportation, raising minimum wage, or funding local schools. This is your life: take the time to help decide what¡¯s best.

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I think it's important. but I don't know politics well. because I am busy and not interested about it.
>> I think it's important but I don't know politics that well  because I am busy and not interested in it. 

 so I always vote politician who my moms like. 
>> So I always vote for politicians that my mom likes. 

she knows politics very a lot and know me and my sister why I vote them.
>> She knows a lot about politics so me and my sister follow her. 
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