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Dear Don,

I was ready to have your lesson with the newspaper. Today, let's talk about Korea Elder people.
When I was child, I lived a house which was not apartment. I think, apartment was seems to be a chicken house.
So, I didn't want to live there. When I got marred, I started to live apartment. but that apartment had not elevator, so I had to walk up till 5 floors. I remember, it was difficult time to live there. Sometimes, I had to take a rice to my home, that weight was 60kg.
After that, I bought new apartment with elevator. it was good and also it had a big parking lot. it was very convenience for me to park my car in the apartment. first apartment had a small parking lot, so I had to find a room to park my car, but if I could not find a room, I had to go out apartment.
but now, current apartment is very good. it has a big parking lot and a good elevator.
See you soon

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Hi Andrew!

See you in a bit. I hope your day was fine ^^

T. DON

Dear Don,
I was ready to have your lesson with the newspaper. Today, let's talk about Korea Elder people.
>> I am ready to have your lesson with the newspaper article. Today, let's talk about Korean Elder people.

When I was child, I lived a house which was not apartment. I think, apartment was seems to be a chicken house.
>> When I was child, I lived in a house which was not an apartment. I think, an apartment seems to be a chicken house.

So, I didn't want to live there. When I got marred, I started to live apartment. but that apartment had not elevator, so I had to walk up till 5 floors. I remember, it was difficult time to live there. Sometimes, I had to take a rice to my home, that weight was 60kg.
>> So, I didn't want to live there. When I got marred, I started to live in an apartment but that apartment had no elevator, so I had to walk up till 5 floors. I remember, it was a difficult time to live there. Sometimes, I had to carry a rice to my home, its weight was 60kg.


After that, I bought new apartment with elevator. it was good and also it had a big parking lot. it was very convenience for me to park my car in the apartment. first apartment had a small parking lot, so I had to find a room to park my car, but if I could not find a room, I had to go out apartment.
>> After that, I bought new apartment with an elevator. it was good and also it had a big parking lot. it was very convenience for me to park my car in the apartment. My first apartment had a small parking lot, so I had to find a room to park my car. But if I could not find a space, I had to go out of my apartment.

but now, current apartment is very good. it has a big parking lot and a good elevator.
>> Now, my current apartment is very good. It has a big parking lot and a good elevator.


See you soon
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