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I want to be a cat! Among the small ones.

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I want to be a medium size, but if I have to be a small one or large ones, I want to be a small one. I don't like things that stand out very well, and large animals usually walk slowly, so I want to be a small and agile animal than a slow one. Among the small animals, I want to be a cat. Cats are cute and, above all, light! And if I can't became cat, I think a hummingbird would be fine too! You may not know hummingbirds, so let me tell you for a moment. The name of the hummingbird is a bird that is as fast as a bee. They are so colorful and so fast that you can't even see their wings when they flying. I think they are the prettiest and cutest birds that can fly!

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Hello Maria (the hummingbird)!

Yes, I know some information on how quick and slick this pretty bird is. As we have discussed in class, being a big animal nowadays has so much disadvantage that is why they can become close to extinction.

It is but smart to choose to be small and have just a tiny diet as well for survival. But then, we can never be animals so as human beings, we need to stay healthy by eating right in order not to become the size of the elephant or rhino.

Thanks for this great composition!

See you!

-T. Donna =)

I want to be a medium size, but if I have to be a small one or large ones, I want to be a small one. 
>> I want to be medium-sized, but if I have to be a small one or large one, I want to be a small one.  

I don't like things that stand out very well, and large animals usually walk slowly, so I want to be a small and agile animal than a slow one. 
>> Correct!

Among the small animals, I want to be a cat. Cats are cute and, above all, light! 
>> Correct!

And if I can't became cat, I think a hummingbird would be fine too! 
>> And if I can't become cat, I think a hummingbird would be fine too! 

You may not know hummingbirds, so let me tell you for a moment. 
>> Correct!

The name of the hummingbird is a bird that is as fast as a bee. 
>> Correct!

They are so colorful and so fast that you can't even see their wings when they flying. 
>> They are so colorful and so fast that you can't even see their wings when they fly.

I think they are the prettiest and cutest birds that can fly!
>> Correct!
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