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What is a mistake that you would want to repeat?

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Well, there is no mistakes what I would want to but sometimes I have some mistakes repeatly especially in memorizing numbers. For example, when I listen to someone's phone number I am confused the order. So, in order to avoid the mistake I write down the number right away and recheck it immediately.

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Hello Jane! Happy Friday to you!

Sometimes, we make mistakes that result to bad things. In some instances, there are some mistakes that can have some good results. Anyway, mistakes are inevitable in our lives, they serve as lessons for us not to repeat what wrong we have done in the past.

Thanks for this answer! See you later in class. 

-T. Donna =) 

Well, there is no mistakes what I would want to but sometimes I have some mistakes repeatly especially in memorizing numbers. 
>> Well, there is no mistakes that I would want to repeat but sometimes I have some repeated mistakes especially in memorizing numbers. 

For example, when I listen to someone's phone number I am confused the order. 
>> For example, when I listen to someone's phone number I am confused with the order. 

So, in order to avoid the mistake I write down the number right away and recheck it immediately.
>> Correct!
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