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Do you think dreams have meanings?

작성자: 이*현
2021-06-18 359

회원님의 영작문

My dream is be a expert in my job.
Currently, my major is environmental engineering. So I think I have a job about that, and I want to be a expertise engineer.
The expert that I think is can act anywhere in the world.
So I need to study about other countries, and I will conversation with global people.
The foundation is that I can use and understand common language, English.
I have study English for a long time like other Korean students.
Therefore I can read it.
But I can't express well through English.
Also, about my major, Denmark, Finland, German and Netherlands is environmental advanced nation, So they have advanced systems.
I want to study in their school, And feel directly in their life.
For my wish, I'm scheduled to applying the outbound program in next month.
For the applying, I achieved the high score in Toeic exam studying very hard for 3 months.
However, It includes a English interview too.
I try to practice myself first, It was not easy. That is why I start this class.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Kang Hyeon, thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin. 

My dream is be a expert in my job.

>>My dream is to be an expert in my job. 
Currently, my major is environmental engineering. So I think I have a job about that, and I want to be a expertise engineer.
>>I am taking Environmental Engineering and I plan to have a career related to my course. I want to be an expert engineer. 
The expert that I think is can act anywhere in the world.
>>I want to be good so I can work anywhere in the world. 
So I need to study about other countries, and I will conversation with global people.
>>I need to study other cultures and I want to talk to a lot of people from different countries. 
The foundation is that I can use and understand common language, English.
>>I want to learn how to communicate in English. 
I have study English for a long time like other Korean students.
>>I have been studying English for a very long time just like other Korean students. 
Therefore I can read it.
>>Therefore, I can already read well. 
But I can't express well through English.
>>But I can't express my thoughts freely in English. 
Also, about my major, Denmark, Finland, German and Netherlands is environmental advanced nation, So they have advanced systems.
>>Also, according to what I've studied, Denmark, Finland, German, and Netherlands are an advanced nation that has an advanced systems. 
I want to study in their school, And feel directly in their life.
>>I want to study in their schools and experience what  they can offer. 
For my wish, I'm scheduled to applying the outbound program in next month.
>>As for me, I am applying the outbound program next month. 
For the applying, I achieved the high score in Toeic exam studying very hard for 3 months.
>>I studied very hard for three months and as a result I got a high score in the TOEIC exam. 
However, It includes a English interview too.
>>However, there will also be an English interview. 
I try to practice myself first, It was not easy. That is why I start this class.
>>I practice a lot but it was not easy, that's why I took this class. 
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