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There are some hobbies that are quite questionable or illegal, can you relate that to teamwork?

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Gambling can be a questionable or illegal hobby. It can also be illegal if relatives gather and play Go-stop on holidays or family gatherings. Although there is no clear scope for what level of temporary entertainment will be illegal, in each situation, the location and time of gambling, the scale of the stakes, and the relationship or motivation of the people who acted can be considered illegal. I think that such gambling sometimes has benefits. There are some positive aspects in that you can build your strategies for winning games and build teamwork when it comes to team competition. But everything is fine with moderation.

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Happy Monday Gianna! Thank you for sharing your thought today :)
~Aki ^^
Gambling can be a questionable or illegal hobby.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Gambling is considered a questionable or illegal hobby.
It can also be illegal if relatives gather and play Go-stop on holidays or family gatherings.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> It is also considered illegal if family members gather and play Go-stop on holidays or gatherings.
Although there is no clear scope for what level of temporary entertainment will be illegal, in each situation, the location and time of gambling, the scale of the stakes, and the relationship or motivation of the people who acted can be considered illegal.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> There is no definite scope with the level of entertainment and its legality; in every situation, time, place, the measure of the money involved, and the impetus of the people can be considered illegal.
 I think that such gambling sometimes has benefits. 
 >>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think gambling sometimes has an advantage.
There are some positive aspects in that you can build your strategies for winning games and build teamwork when it comes to team competition. 
 >>> CORRECT!
OR>> Building your strategies and teamwork when it comes to team competition are some positive aspects of gambling.
But everything is fine with moderation.
 >>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Every thing is fine in moderation.
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