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Hmm... I have a phobia of heights, but I think I'm brave nonetheless. Actually, you will think of this that is a bad habit, when I'm afraid of things in front of my eyes, I pretend not to be afraid when I'm in front of other people. But on the inside of me, I'm very scared of that. Surprisingly, there are many things that I am afraid of. Bugs (even more if it's a big bug), ghosts, apartment rooftops (because of my fear of heights...), swinging bridges, horror movies (actually, I really want to see this before when I see it, but after seeing it, I keep thinking about it so I hate it..). But surprisingly one more time is, I also like thrilling things like roller coasters and gyro drops in amusement park. Maybe when I thought about it, I like to come down from a high place in the blink of an eye, but I don't like being in a high place for a long time.
P.S. If you don't afraid of this second picture, you don't have a phobia of heights. (I was very afraid when I finding this picture...¤Ì¤Ì)

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Happy new week to you Maria!

Phobias of people are varied and some of yours are mine too. Well, being scared of something means that we had a bad experience about something  and we do not like to repeat it. Anyway, if you try to overcome your phobia, that means that you are truly courageous!

Always be brave! See you later!

-T. Donna =) 

Hmm... I have a phobia of heights, but I think I'm brave nonetheless. 
>> Correct!

Actually, you will think of this that is a bad habit, when I'm afraid of things in front of my eyes, I pretend not to be afraid when I'm in front of other people. 
>> Actually, you will think of this as a bad habit. When I'm afraid of things in front of my eyes, I pretend not to be afraid when I'm in front of other people. 

But on the inside of me, I'm very scared of that. 
>> But inside of me, I'm very scared of it.

Surprisingly, there are many things that I am afraid of. 
>> Correct!

Bugs (even more if it's a big bug), ghosts, apartment rooftops (because of my fear of heights...), swinging bridges, horror movies (actually, I really want to see this before when I see it, but after seeing it, I keep thinking about it so I hate it..). 
>> Correct!

But surprisingly one more time is, I also like thrilling things like roller coasters and gyro drops in amusement park. 
>> But surprisingly, I also like thrilling things like roller coasters and gyro drops in the amusement park. 

Maybe when I thought about it, I like to come down from a high place in the blink of an eye, but I don't like being in a high place for a long time.
>> Maybe when I think about it, I like to come down from a high place in a blink of an eye, but I don't like being in a high place for a long time.

P.S. If you don't afraid of this second picture, you don't have a phobia of heights. (I was very afraid when I finding this picture...¤Ì¤Ì)
>> P.S. If you are not afraid of this second picture, you don't have a phobia of heights. (I was very afraid when I found this picture...¤Ì¤Ì)
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