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Am I a good person?

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Some people say they feel comfortable and safe with me.
In addition, they like to talk to me about everything.
So they call me or visit me to discuss their issues.
So am I a good person?

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Hi Eun Ha!
This is outstanding work!
You are doing well these days.
I hope you can be consistent with your efforts. 
I believe in you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Some people say they feel comfortable and safe with me.
>> Correct
In addition, they like to talk to me about everything.
>> Correct
So they call me or visit me to discuss their issues.
>> Correct
So am I a good person?
>> Correct
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