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The problem facing for the disabled

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In Korea, I think welfare and facilities for the disabled are good.
I know there are a variety of benefits to them.
However, I think some people have still had negative recognitions of them.
So there are some problems where they are abused in some conditions.
In my opinion, this is an important issue facing for them.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I really look forward to your further growth. 
Keep working hard.
Let's celebrate the small victories.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In Korea, I think welfare and facilities for the disabled are good.
>> Correct
I know there are a variety of benefits to them.
>> I know there are a variety of benefits for them.
However, I think some people have still had negative recognitions of them.
>> However, I think some people still have a negative perspective on them. 
So there are some problems where they are abused in some conditions.
>> Correct
In my opinion, this is an important issue facing for them.
>> In my opinion, this is an important issue that they are facing. 
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