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The interior of my house is nomal.
It's made of white walls and wood.
There's only furniture that you really need.
The interior of my room is normal, but there's one point.
It's took pictures of me on one wall.

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Good job, Gina! You described your house interior design understandably. I hope you keep doing it!-Faith-
The interior of my house is nomal.
>> The interior of my house is normal.
It's made of white walls and wood.
>> CORRECT
There's only furniture that you really need.
>> There's only a few furniture that you really need.
The interior of my room is normal, but there's one point.
>> The interior of my room is normal, but there's one important point there for me.
OR Nothing special in my room except for one part of it.
It's took pictures of me on one wall.
>> It has pictures of me on one wall.
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