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What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?

작성자: 이*현
2021-06-23 386

회원님의 영작문

It is important topic to me. I care my health more than my friends do it.
I have take several food supplements for about ten years.
My ideal fitness program must have both enrich nutrition diet and regular physical activity.
Nutrition balanced diet make energy to do anythings.
Regularly exercising make strength to maintain conditions.
Therefore, I try to have meals on time at thrice a day.
However, it is quite hard, Because modern people don't have a enough time.
In addition to, I go to the gym as well as have a personal training at least thrice a day.
It make my physical strength high. So I can enjoy a day entirely.
Both are important. But many people miss that.
I usually worried their health, So I recommend my ideal fitness program for family and friends including you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kang!

It's good to read your composition today.  I hope you always take note of your mistakes and be familiar with English grammar.  Your errors are your stepping stones in learning the language.  You can do it! ^^


-T. Maine


It is important topic to me. I care my health more than my friends do it.

>>It is an important topic to me.  I take care of my health more than my friends do.
 I have take several food supplements for about ten years.

>>I have taken several food supplements for almost ten years.
 My ideal fitness program must have both enrich nutrition diet and regular physical activity.

>>My ideal fitness program must have both enriched nutritious diet and regular physical activities.
 Nutrition balanced diet make energy to do anythings.

>>Having a nutritious balanced diet makes me energetic.
 Regularly exercising make strength to maintain conditions.

>>A regular exercise makes me strong and maintain my body in good condition.
 Therefore, I try to have meals on time at thrice a day. 

>>Therefore, I keep in mind to have my meals thrice a day.
 However, it is quite hard, Because modern people don't have a enough time.

>>However, it is quite hard because people nowadays are always busy.
 In addition to, I go to the gym as well as have a personal training at least thrice a day.

>>In addition to this, I go to the gym as well as have a personal training at least thrice a day.
 It make my physical strength high. So I can enjoy a day entirely.

>>It makes me dynamic so I can enjoy my day.
 Both are important. But many people miss that.

>>Both are important, but many people still miss doing them.
 I usually worried their health, So I recommend my ideal fitness program for family and friends including you.

>>I am usually worried about my family and friends' health.  So I recommend my ideal fitness program to them including you.

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