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What is the best place for a vacation in your country? Why is it good?

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One of the best places for summer vacation is Gangneung.
Gangneung is located near East sea of Korea.
East sea of Korea have dip blue color and It is also dip.
The beaches of Gangneung are good to swim in the water because It is dip.
The light of water is very twinkle.
The beaches have a variety of colors like dip blue, emerald ,green, etc.
When the surface has sunshine, It looks like wide silk. So people can get the best picture.
Walking on the soft sand, watching the fascinated beach, having the cool wind must be a memorable experience.
It have a different attraction from other seas, so many of Koreans love the destination.
Some people enjoy surfing on the sea. I hope I can do it there. It looks like very exciting.
In addition to, Gangneung has famous their food like soft tofu stew, ice cream, etc.
It is very delicious. The soft tofu ice cream is aromatic. You can't foresee the taste. It is like cereal crops.
Because of the reasons, I really recommend the city on this vacation.

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One of the best places for summer vacation is Gangneung.

>>One of the best places for a summer vacation is Gangneung.
 Gangneung is located near East sea of Korea.

>>It is located near the eastern sea of Korea.
 East sea of Korea have dip blue color and It is also dip.

>>The eastern sea of Korea has a deep blue color and it is also deep.
 The beaches of Gangneung are good to swim in the water because It is dip. 

>>The beaches of Gangneung are good for swimming because it is deep.
 The light of water is very twinkle.

>>The color of the water is very beautiful.
 The beaches have a variety of colors like dip blue, emerald ,green, etc.

>>The beaches have various colors like deep blue, emerald, and green.
 When the surface has sunshine, It looks like wide silk. So people can get the best picture.

>>When the sun hits the surface of the sea, it looks like a wide silk.  So people can get the best photo of it.
 Walking on the soft sand, watching the fascinated beach, having the cool wind must be a memorable experience.

>>Walking on soft sand, watching the attractive view of the beach, and feeling the cool wind must be one of the most memorable experiences you can have in this place.
 It have a different attraction from other seas, so many of Koreans love the destination.

>>It has a unique view from other seas, so many Koreans love this destination.
 Some people enjoy surfing on the sea. I hope I can do it there. It looks like very exciting.

>>Some people enjoy surfing in the sea.  I hope I can do it, too.  It looks very exciting.
 In addition to, Gangneung has famous their food like soft tofu stew, ice cream, etc.

>>In addition, Gangneung has been famous because of their food like soft tofu stew and ice cream.
 It is very delicious. The soft tofu ice cream is aromatic.

>>They are very delicious.  The soft tofu and ice cream have good aroma.

You can't foresee the taste. It is like cereal crops.

>>The taste is unpredictable.  It is like cereal crops.
 Because of the reasons, I really recommend the city on this vacation.

>>Because of these reasons, I really recommend this city for your next destination.

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