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What food can you recommend for me to eat in Korea?

작성자: 이*현
2021-06-25 572

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You shouldn't miss to eat the tteokbokki in Korea.
It is long rice cakes like noodle with spicy sause.
A lot of Korean love the food. There are the chennel about tteokbokki in Youtube.
Many Korean really miss the food specially when they're in other country.
It have a variety of types. One of the famous franchise is "엽기떡볶이" which is a represent of very spicy foods.
The collaboration with fried chicken is popular picnic food. The way to eat is that the chicken piece dip into the pick tteokbokki sauce.
It's original version is too spicy to eat for me, so I usually eat less spicy version.
If you like spicy food, I recommend to challenge the food.
Although you can't eat spicy food, you can enjoy the other type with garlic sauce, or rose one.
2021 Korea trend food is rose tteokbokki, which is famous among young people.
It is less spicy than original, and more creamy, sweaty. the sauce is mixing original rose sauce and spicy sauce.
I hope the food restaurants are made over the world.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kang!

Thanks for this answer.  Don't forget to study the correct sentences.  :)


-T. Maine


You shouldn't miss to eat the tteokbokki in Korea.

>>Correct.
 It is long rice cakes like noodle with spicy sause.

>>These are long rice cakes like noodles with spicy sauce.
 A lot of Korean love the food. There are the chennel about tteokbokki in Youtube.

>>A lot of Koreans love this food.  There are channels about tteokbokki on Youtube.
 Many Korean really miss the food specially when they're in other country.

>>Many Koreans really miss the food specially when they're in other countries.
 It have a variety of types. One of the famous franchise is "엽기떡볶이" which is a represent of very spicy foods.

>>It has a variety of types.  One of the most famous franchise is "엽기떡볶이"which represents very spicy food.
 The collaboration with fried chicken is popular picnic food.

>>Its collaboration with fried chicken is popular in picnics.

The way to eat is that the chicken piece dip into the pick tteokbokki sauce.

>>To eat this, dip a piece of chicken into a chosen tteokbokki sauce.
 It's original version is too spicy to eat for me, so I usually eat less spicy version.

>>Its original version is too spicy to eat for me, so I usually eat the less spicy version.
 If you like spicy food, I recommend to challenge the food.

>>If you like spicy food, you shouln't miss it for the world.
 Although you can't eat spicy food, you can enjoy the other type with garlic sauce, or rose one.

>>Even though you can't eat spicy food, you can still enjoy other types of sauce such as garlic sauce or rose sauce.
 2021 Korea trend food is rose tteokbokki, which is famous among young people.

>>In 2021, rose tteokbokki became the trend among young people in Korea.
 It is less spicy than original, and more creamy, sweaty.

>>It is less spicy than the original one and considered creamier and sweeter.

the sauce is mixing original rose sauce and spicy sauce.

>>The sauce is a mixture of the original rose sauce and spicy sauce.
 I hope the food restaurants are made over the world.

>>I hope all restaurants in the world have this food.
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