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This was a performance evaluation, and the teacher asked me to give a presentation on the topic of upcycling. This is not a big announcement, but I chose this one, because the script remains.
"Hi, I'm going to introduce upcycling headband. This headband was made from necklace. You don't know what I'm talking about, because it's your first time hearing it. Let me put it simply. You can think of it as a headband with a necklace wrapped around your head. This is how to make it. First, you have to prepare several necklaces, a rubber band, tweezers, a hook, wood glue and soft fabric. Your head doesn't hurt at all, because I put a fabric on the bottom of your necklace. If you combine these, you'll be able to make them quickly. Also, it will have a good effect on the environment since it is reusing a plastic necklace. Thank you for your listening!"
Actually, it was a very satisfactory performance evaluation because I got an All A!

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Hello Maria!

I am a very proud teacher here! I am sure that if you become a diplomat, you will be heard by a lot of people so you have to keep practicing to deliver your speeches until the time that you are no longer afraid to stay in front of a lot of people. Correct constant practice makes perfect!

Thank you for sending me this. It is really a very good speech! Carry on!

-T. Donna =)

This was a performance evaluation, and the teacher asked me to give a presentation on the topic of upcycling. 
>> Correct!

This is not a big announcement, but I chose this one, because the script remains.
>> Correct!

"Hi, I'm going to introduce upcycling headband. 
>> Correct!

This headband was made from necklace. 
>> Correct!

You don't know what I'm talking about, because it's your first time hearing it. 
>> Correct!

Let me put it simply. 
>> Correct!

You can think of it as a headband with a necklace wrapped around your head. 
>> Correct!

This is how to make it. 
>> Correct!

First, you have to prepare several necklaces, a rubber band, tweezers, a hook, wood glue and soft fabric. 
>> Correct!

Your head doesn't hurt at all, because I put a fabric on the bottom of your necklace. 
>> Correct!

If you combine these, you'll be able to make them quickly. 
>> Correct!

Also, it will have a good effect on the environment since it is reusing a plastic necklace. 
>> Correct!

Thank you for your listening!"
>> Correct!

Actually, it was a very satisfactory performance evaluation because I got an All A!
>> Correct!
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