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When do you prefer having a family gathering?

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2021-06-30 364

회원님의 영작문

I want to go to the vacation with my nuclear family in summer and winter.
When I was elementary school student, we often went trip anywhere.
Among the experiences, I have loved to play in water.
I'm memorable I traveled some island in domestic or other country.
We went abroad to join vacation annually.
They are amazing experience.
I can't forget to eye-contact with the fishes during snorkeling,
I can't forget the row tuna's taste on the boat on the sea.
I can't forget the emerald color water when I'm in the sea.
The vacation in abroad had different mood. It can't explain through word. I love the romantic mood.
Now that I was grown adult, I can't go vacation abroad with all family members, because my parent have different trip preference.
We even have hard time to go to the domestic vacation.
I still try to go to the sea or water park with friends.
I hope I have this vacation with my family members as many as possible.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kang!

Thanks for this.  Keep on writing. :)


-T. Maine   


I want to go to the vacation with my nuclear family in summer and winter.

>>I want to have a vacation with my nuclear family in summer and winter.
 When I was elementary school student, we often went trip anywhere.

>>When I was an elementary school student, we used to travel anywhere.
 Among the experiences, I have loved to play in water.

>>Among these experiences, I have loved to play in winter.
 I'm memorable I traveled some island in domestic or other country.

>>It's a  memorable experience  when I travel to a domestic or international island.
 We went abroad to join vacation annually.

>>We went abroad annually to join some vacation.
 They are amazing experience. 

>>They are amazing experiences.
 I can't forget to eye-contact with the fishes during snorkeling,

>>I can't forget an eye-to-eye contact with some fish during snorkeling.
 I can't forget the row tuna's taste on the boat on the sea.

>>I can't forget the taste of raw tuna while we were on the boat.
 I can't forget the emerald color water when I'm in the sea.

>>I can't forget the emerald color of the sea.
 The vacation in abroad had different mood. It can't explain through word. I love the romantic mood.

>>My vacation abroad gave me a different mood. It's unexplainable.  I love the romantic mood.
 Now that I was grown adult, I can't go vacation abroad with all family members, because my parent have different trip preference.

>>Now that I am an adult, I can't go abroad with all my family members because my parents have different preferences in traveling.
 We even have hard time to go to the domestic vacation.

>>We even have a hard time where to travel domestically.
 I still try to go to the sea or water park with friends.

>>I still go to the beach or the water park with my friends.
 I hope I have this vacation with my family members as many as possible.

>>I hope I have much time to spend my vacation with my family.

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