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The emotion of hate

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2021-06-30 390

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I never think that the emotion of hate will disappear from humans.
Normal people will sometimes give a lots of the hurt words when
they get bad feeling or dissatisfied mind about some problems.
For one thing, If it will be supplied the pain work and difficult situation
by their couples or lovers, they have more and more the emotion of hate.

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Hi Mr. Jin!
This is truly something to think about.
It's a good issue to discuss face to face.
Let's talk more about it in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I never think that the emotion of hate will disappear from humans.
>> Correct
Normal people will sometimes give a lots of the hurt words when they get bad feeling or dissatisfied mind about some problems.
>> Normal people will sometimes say lots of hurtful words when they feel bad or dissatisfied about some problems.
For one thing, If it will be supplied the pain work and difficult situation
>> For one thing, pain would result and difficult situations would arise.
by their couples or lovers, they have more and more the emotion of hate.
>> Hate can build up between couples and lovers.
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