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Nowadays people enjoy art by webtoons or illustrates on the Internet. As the demanding of Internet platform has developed abruptly, many investors focus on it and try to improve its functions. These trials affect positively the growing up art industry for example, webtoons and illustrations. They are read by many people, and it would become a trend among them. I think the reason of success is how familiar it is with consumers. People can access the Internet platform with their cellphones and use diverse functions in it. Therefore, if the companies keep developing these things, more and more people will appreciate and enjoy the art.

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Nowadays people enjoy art by webtoons or illustrates on the Internet. 
>>>  Nowadays, people enjoy art through webtoons or illustrations on the Internet.   
As the demanding of Internet platform has developed abruptly, many investors focus on it and try to improve its functions. 
>>> As the demand of Internet platform has developed abruptly, many investors focus on it and try to improve its functions.     
These trials affect positively the growing up art industry for example, webtoons and illustrations. 
>>> These trials affect the growth of the art industry positively. For example, webtoons and illustrations.    
They are read by many people, and it would become a trend among them. 
>>> correct  
I think the reason of success is how familiar it is with consumers. 
>>> correct    
People can access the Internet platform with their cellphones and use diverse functions in it. 
>>> correct   
Therefore, if the companies keep developing these things, more and more people will appreciate and enjoy the art.
>>> correct   

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