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Why do people sometimes feel afraid to express their real emotions?

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I think people sometimes feel afraid ro express their real emotions because of other people.
Sometimes we shouldn't express our real emotions because of other people's feeling.
If our feelings are very great because we got prices, but someone can feel very bad because he didn't get the price.
So I think people sometimes feel afraid ro express their real emotions because of other people.

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I think people sometimes feel afraid ro express their real emotions because of other people.
>> I think people sometimes feel afraid to express their real emotions because of other people.

Sometimes we shouldn't express our real emotions because of other people's feeling.
>> CORRECT

If our feelings are very great because we got prices, but someone can feel very bad because he didn't get the price.
>> For example, sometime we hide our happiness because it can cause sadness to other people. 

So I think people sometimes feel afraid ro express their real emotions because of other people.
>>So this is why I think that people sometimes are afraid to express their real emotions. 
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