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My health condition

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회원님의 영작문

Dear Don,

Last Saturday, I met my old friends. but I didn't drink any alcoholic beverages, because of my bad health condition.
When I leaved my home, I promised my wife not to drink it and I kept my promise.
I only tasted a little bit and I knew my body would reject it. so I could not drink it.
but I paid for the food and alcoholic beverages, because I was sorry not to drink it together.

After meeting my friends, I was running in parking area, because of raining outside.
Sunday morning, I checked my weight. it was decreased 600g, so I was very happy.
Now, I will go to running, which I love.
Today, my English condition was not good. tomorrow, let talk about newspaper.

Thanks

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Andrew!

Thank you for this composition. See you a bit later.

T. DON

Dear Don,

Last Saturday, I met my old friends. but I didn't drink any alcoholic beverages because of my bad health condition.
>> CORRECT

When I leaved my home, I promised my wife not to drink it and I kept my promise.
>> When I left home, I promised my wife not to drink it and I kept my promise.

I only tasted a little bit and I knew my body would reject it so I could not drink it.
>> CORRECT

but I paid for the food and alcoholic beverages, because I was sorry not to drink it together.
>> Cut I paid for the food and alcoholic beverages because I was sorry not to drink it with them.

After meeting my friends, I was running in parking area, because of raining outside.
>> After meeting my friends, I ran into the parking area because it was raining.

Sunday morning, I checked my weight. it was decreased 600g, so I was very happy.
>> Lase Sunday morning, I checked my weight and I lost 600g so I was very happy.

Now, I will go to running, which I love.
>> Now, I will run again which I love to do.

Today, my English condition was not good. tomorrow, let talk about newspaper.
>> Today, my English condition was not good. Tomorrow, let's talk about newspaper article.

Thanks
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