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Who are you named after? What is the meaning of your name?

작성자: 이*현
2021-07-06 587

회원님의 영작문

When my mother get me, she want to make my name one letter that is like 'Han'
If my mother were strong more, my name is unique, and I love my name directly, because it looks pretty.
However, my father's family has family tree record, so the members have to share the same letter in their names' second letter follow the record fomula.
In my turn, the priority letter is 'yong'.
My grandfather is top of the family, so he almost made my name used that.
My father didn't agree because the name is very old-fashioned as well as the letter "yong" hardly use in girls' name in Korea.
The second priority letter is 'kang', and finally my grandfather and father compromise to use the letter.
However, the letter looks like boys' name too, so I didn't like my name. I can't think my name is pretty.
When I went anywhere, people usually said "is Kang hyeon girl? I think you're boy."
But now, I love my name.
The word looks like more stronger than another girls' one and the accent's sound good and impressed.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang!
"You can choose your friends, but not your family."  Your name might be given with a special meaning. Let's see what it means. :)


-T. Maine


When my mother get me, she want to make my name one letter that is like 'Han'

>>When my mother bore me, she wanted to give me one letter for my name such as 'Han'.
 If my mother were strong more, my name is unique, and I love my name directly, because it looks pretty.

>>If my mother were strong enough, my name would be unique.  I love my name because it is pretty.
 However, my father's family has family tree record, so the members have to share the same letter in their names' second letter follow the record fomula.

>>However, my father's family has their ancestoral tree, so the members of the family should share the same letter in their names.  The second letter gets the formula.
 In my turn, the priority letter is 'yong'.

>>In my generation, the next letter is 'yong'.
 My grandfather is top of the family, so he almost made my name used that.

>>My grandfather is the head of the family so he gave me my name.
 My father didn't agree because the name is very old-fashioned as well as the letter "yong" hardly use in girls' name in Korea.

>>My father didn't agree because the name was very old-fashioned as well at the letter 'yong' was hardly used by females in Korea.
 The second priority letter is 'kang', and finally my grandfather and father compromise to use the letter.

>>The second important letter is 'kang' and my grandfather and father settled in using that letter.
 However, the letter looks like boys' name too, so I didn't like my name. I can't think my name is pretty.

>>However, the letter sounds like a boy's name, too.  So I didn't like my name. I can't agree that my name is pretty.
 When I went anywhere, people usually said "is Kang hyeon girl? I think you're boy."
But now, I love my name.

>>When I went somewhere, people usually asked if Kang Hyeon was a girl.  They think I was a boy.  But now, I love my name.
 The word looks like more stronger than another girls' one and the accent's sound good and impressed.

>>The word is stronger than another girl's name and the sound is good.  I feel impressed of my name.

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