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The elders get angry or argue about some matters when the young don't agree with their opinions
without special events,
and the price of the market suddenly raised much more than they thought about items.
The elders are seriously considered about young people's insists when they debate with the young
and sometimes,they dislike them.

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Hi Mr. Jin!
There are some parts of your composition that we need to discuss.
Hopefully, you'll be up for it later during the class.
I will see you then.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The elders get angry or argue about some matters when the young don't agree with their opinions
>> Correct
without special events, and the price of the market suddenly raised much more than they thought about items.
>> If there is no special event, the market price of some items may suddenly increase more than what is expected. 
The elders are seriously considered about young people's insists when they debate with the young
>> The elders seriously consider young people's opinions when they have a discussion.
and sometimes,they dislike them.
>> Sometimes, they also dislike them. 
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